I need to edit this story i've created. My current formula is weak, needs a bit of the old polish. I'm putting these notes here because I know if I save them on my computer they are going to get lost in the massive amount of other files i've saved.
The Unlikely Hero- Our main character starts with selfishness. He partakes in this new world because it is an escape, it is his source of amusement, but he does not care for it's inhabitants. This selfishness is already well established in the early chapters.
2. I must add someone to give the hero a reason to care. Someone he quickly develops an attachment to.
3. Kill of that attachment by the end of the book. This in turn will cause a shift in development. Now the Hero has a reason to care, justice, vengeance, emotion.
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